Wednesday, October 8, 2014

DRAMATIC TENSION

DRAMATIC TENSION

With all the gardens, the flowers,the fairies, the midsummer night dream
like atmosphere, the balcony,the staircase,the piano, the singing, there was no dramatic tension.
It was pretty to look at but thats exactly it was.  Pretty which turns to dull and cumbersome.
Its like saying, 'I don't need you."
'i don't want you"
I am alright without you."
Give me some tension
Some drama
some thing to think about afterwards.
Just pretty we don't need.
I am Ok without it.

It becomes unfunny, unattractive, at times it feels emotionless,untragic,
Too long and eventually boring.

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